This Letter(name not confirmed)

(verse1)
Looking back at the written paper
that shoud've been given you months before
Could'nt delay it any later
I could'nt keep it anymore.

(verse2)
As i make my way down the street }
I started to shiver with a fear } Needs improvement, help!!
What if i lose you forever, }
What if you give me another chance }

(bridge)
Would You still care about me,
after receiving the letter i wrote
Or would you leave me all alone,
After reading this letter i wrote

(chorus) (x2)
So Sorry Don't leave me alone
I just wanna tell you who i really am
After you read the letter til the end
You left me all alone

(some intro riff)
(bridge)
(chorus)

(Slow Part) }
You left the door open }
I knew it was our turn } Im thinking of omiting this verse..help out
But i have to take the risk } in this!!
I gotta let it out in a brisk }
And here it goes }

(chorus)
(finish)

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